Friday 21 October 2016

Writing Reflection T4 W1

This week for writing we have carried on with our explanations. This week did it on a special place to our family mine is "Hokitika"!   
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  1. Unknown21 October 2016 at 18:17

    Hello Rikki-Lee. I could really feel how you felt through this story! I'm sorry to hear about your baby cousin Jai that died there. This is amazing work! Something that you could work on is putting your Fullstops in your story. I ran out of breath. But either then that, this is Awesome! Keep up the Amazing work Rikki!
    From Alisi.

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    1. Unknown22 October 2016 at 08:41

      Kia Ora, Alisi.
      Yes it is very said my cousin died but he couldn't help it. I will put some more full stops in my explantion. You have done some amazing work on your, blog!
      -Rikki-Lee

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